"Hope has nothing to do with optimism. I am in no way optimistic about America, nor am I optimistic about the plight of the human species on this globe. There is simply not enough evidence that allows me to infer that things are going to get better. That has been the perennial state and condition of not simply black people in America, but all self-conscious human beings who are sensitive to the forms of evil around them. We can be prisoners of hope even as we call optimism into question." --Cornel West, Moral Obligations of a Democratic Society

Monday, February 15, 2010

Is it merely a coincidence that the best engineered and safest automobiles are accessible only to the rich? Do poor people not deserve the same quality and safety as the rich? This is a small example of the underlying failure of our society to treat all people justly. Maxine Hong Kingston’s essay “No Name Woman” develops the theme of injustice toward Chinese women by our society. This idea of inequality is further developed by Cornell West in his essay “Moral Obligations of a Democratic Society”. Annon summarizes the poor treatment of people on a worldwide basis by our society as a whole. These are all examples of how the perspective of an author can be influenced by their surroundings.
Fair treatment of people has been a problem since the dawn of time. In Maxine Hong Kingston’s “no name woman”, she deals with the wrongs suffered by Chinese women in an American society. Kingston does this by developing a theme of injustice that spawns from the family and outstretches to the community. Traditionally, Chinese women were thought as a burden to their family and did not meet the standard that their culture demanded. Families would go to outlandish depths to ensure their children were worthy of society standards, she even discussed the ritual of binding of the feet, saying “we were lucky that we didn’t have to have our feet bound when we were seven”. Additionally, this desire to meet the norm permeated throughout the household, her aunt was so upset with a freckle that “she dug it out with a hot needle and washed the wound with peroxide”. This view of Chinese women, not meeting the specified criteria, was present in all aspects of the community. She shared a personal experience of not meeting society requirements with the reader, stating” I made myself American-pretty” because a Chinese woman was not good enough to attract the attention of her schoolmates. She also uses the term “American-feminine” to describe the transformation required of Chinese women to meet status quo, adjusting their walk and speech, in an attempt to rid themselves of their Chinese-femininity. Her personal experience of shunning from both her family and the community was a small glimpse of the injustice suffered by Chinese women in this society.
Similarly West also deals with injustice, however, his writing focuses on issues that blacks suffer due to this society. Initially he focuses on the lack of identity experienced by blacks in this society. For example, west discussed the decline of the neighborhood as the source for problems in the society, stating that the lack of interaction and development of family values even threatens their “sense of what it is to be human.” Additionally, he says “once the humanity of a people is problematized, they are called into question perennially,” which effectively continues to lower their self-confidence. Blacks are stigmatized as problematic due to their inability to attain the standard, a standard represented by skin color and physical attributes. Secondly, he discusses how financial difficulties derived from the democratic society are prerequisites for the problems experienced by minorities. West compares the black family to an investment, introducing the concept of nonmarket activity and raising a family, simply stating “much sacrifice and service goes into it without any assurance that the providers will get anything back.” The minimal return seen by parents does not justify the resources invested, creating a rift in family structure, when the investors have to weigh the long term cost associated with such a low return. Furthermore, this scarcity of “nonmarket values” has led to the failure of blacks to rally behind a cause and ultimately losing hope as their neighborhoods and families fail. Most of the problems experienced by blacks can be attributed to their financial status, poor education and high crime rates are indicative of the poverty level seen by black children, as noted by west when he explains that “51 percent of young black brothers and sisters live in poverty in the richest nation in the history of the world”. Obviously, west acknowledges the problems that blacks suffer in this society as a product of society failing to meet the needs of blacks financially and a loss of self as the black family erodes when nonmarket values are not satisfied.
Kofi Annan focuses on a more global injustice in his acceptance speech for the Nobel Peace Prize. Annan discusses the unfairness our society has shown people around the world, contrary to the basic freedoms most nations claim to uphold. Initially, Annan discusses the wrongs that have been portrayed throughout time against poor people. His initial argument discusses an afghan girl, her conditions are seen by him as “inhuman”, because she can’t get her basic needs met due to the economic status of the area she is born. Furthermore, Annon discusses how poverty can negate the opportunity for people to maximize their ability and overcome the problems surrounding them. When impoverished people struggle to have their needs met, creativity and opportunity is lost which digs a figurative hole in which they can never overcome. Secondly, he eludes to unfair practices shown to people of different ethnic backgrounds. One of the greatest examples we have of injustice toward people of different backgrounds, is the genocide portrayed by Germany. Annon addresses such issues stating “A campaign of “ethnic cleansing“ begins with one neighbor turning on another”, a practice that we see still today despite the best efforts of our society. All in all, Annons’ speech brought to light how far we are from solving the world’s issues surrounding fair treatment despite race, ethnic, or economic status.
The fair treatment of “man” has been a problem since the beginning of time and was the underlying theme of all the essays discussed today. Kingston emphasized cultural issues related to Chinese women, while West discussed the problems experienced by blacks in America, and a final argument by Annon on worldwide issues for the people with different backgrounds.

5 comments:

  1. A definite positive in the Intro. was the introduction to the authors, you gave both the titles of the essays and a little background on the work you'd be discusing. It really set the stage for the rest of the essay.

    A couple things to consider: in the first two opening sentences you ended with "the rich". Back to back like that they ended up sounding a little strange. Secondly, you introduced Kingston and West with their full name but you didn't use "Kofi" to introduce "Annan". And this sentence "Most of the problems experienced by blacks can be attributed to their financial status, poor education and high crime rates are indicative of the poverty level seen by black children, as noted by west when he explains that “51 percent of young black brothers and sisters live in poverty in the richest nation in the history of the world” is maybe a run-on. It lost a little clarity in the middle and may do better as two stand alone sentences.

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  2. Thanks Brad, I looked over most of the things you mentioned when I revised my draft. Perhaps a new revision is needed. ;-)

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  3. I liked your over essay the introduction was clear and your body paraghraphs flowed together nicely. Last your conclusion simply tied everything up.

    I noticed a couples things while reading your paper. You added commas and periods after your quotes when they should be within your quotations. another thing i notice was that you used she a lot in your kingston paragraph> I think it would sound better if you referred to "she" as something else.

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  4. good essay for the most part. you can tell you read through the essays verycarefully and got good examples from reading. a few places you needed to capatilize a few things and in the first 2 body paragraphs i was confused on what the theme was. maybe you should just add it in a few times to not confuse any one

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  5. Andraya, I did not notice the inconsistencies with the punctuation with regard to the quotes. Thank you.

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